Mark sits at his computer, chatting with his friends, while also talking on the phone. On monitor in the computer, Mark is talking about a new game with his friend Tom, while on the phone he’s talking to Alex about a new movie. On the computer, Tom keeps sending Mark messages that are very long and not very interesting so Mark is more interested in talking on the phone with Alex. However, Mark’s eye is suddenly caught by a very short message from Tom:
Tom: “Hold on, I thought I heard something.”
Next;
Tom: “Someone’s inside my house.”
Then Mark quickly types;
Mark: “Where?”
After a couple seconds comes this response;
Tom: “Upstairs from the sounasdogjliyihml;’rfarg9119119191991911ahtsetwrh”
Suddenly, Tom logs off. After a couple seconds, Mark realizes that this kind of message might have resulted from someone pounding their fist against the keyboard and accidentally sending it. He also notices that it looks as if his friend managed to type 911. He explains all this to Alex on the phone. Alex responds;
Alex: “He’s gotta be messin’ with you, man. I mean, what reason would someone...*CRASH* Hey, what the?!! Somebody just bro*running feet followed by sounds of a punch or kick* Ugh *click beeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeep*
Mark stares at the phone in disbelief. Worried and confused on what to do.
*at some point he talks to another one of his friends on a web cam, and then, Mark’s friend on the web cam gets grabbed from behind.*
Then one by one, all Mark's friends sign offline, until Mark is the only one left…
Tuesday, May 8, 2007
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6 comments:
SCARRYYYYYY!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! HELP MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!! ahhahah good job. <3
First off, 1 and 9 are nowhere near each other on the key board so it is very doubtful that he would randomly strike that particular gibberish, particularly not with one fist. I really don't get why this had to be written. I mean I understand what the whole thing is all about and I can see how this could be made into one of those crappy movies they churn out every other week, but I don't get why. It doesn't really add anything to the world, it's not funny, or clever, and it doesn't really add to the greater understanding of the human condition. I don't know, write the rest of it, see where it goes and than maybe I'll review your case. No promises.
Also, Dane Cook sucks.
Morgan, do not listen to Johannes, he only writes about men who fail at hunting rhino. Why???
The reason "they churn out [these types of movies] every other week" is because people love them (ok, Johannes, most people).
Interesting contemporary idea for the classic teen slasher flick.
Johannes is an a88hole. dont lsiten to him. this was Really good! i love "Then one by one, all Mark's friends sign offline, until Mark is the only one left… "
OMG Yay!!
ahaha yay emmy =]
this is seriously one of the oddest screenplays..well, mine is prettyyy weird too..not gonna lie! hahahaha yea but goooood jobbbb liddle M boo =]
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