Writing this peice I was thinking about love and this just came to me. Alot of people write about love and their feelings in poems so I figured I would give it a try. Alot of girls have feelings towards a guy but dont know how to express it or tell him, so they keep quite I can relate to that. So I thought I'd write some of my feelings in a poem.
Everyone knows;
they all know how I feel.
But why doesn't he?
Is it because he is afraid?
He doesn't want to admit to my feelings?
Each day theres something new,
either a new reason to be near me
or a new reason to hide from me.
I try not to think about it,
but i really want to know how he feels.
and if he feels at all.
Everyone knows;
they know how I feel.
And so does he.
Thursday, March 8, 2007
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2 comments:
this is really good emmy! you did an excellent job conveying the thoughts and feelings that are in the poem, and i can sense how the character feels about the boy in the poem, the deep affection she has for him; also the sadness she feels since he won't acknowledge her feelings. it's really really REALLY good! i love you <3
aw emmy this is soo good, i love how you ask questions in your poem, it makes the reader want to know the answer to them =) good job !!
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