because it's -- e.e. Cummings
Spring
thingS
dare to do people
(& notthe other way
round)because it
's A
pril
Lives lead their own
persons(in
stead
of everybodyelse's)but
what's wholly marvellous my
Darling
is that you &
i are more than you
& i(be
ca
us
e It's we)
In the winter
in the winter faceS
blu
r(eyes tear fromthecold)
January’S wind blows
And hits peoples
faces.
The (only sound)is the one
of the trees blowing in the wind.
Me (and
you) we
walk down the empty
streets
until the sun goes d
ow
n.
Friday, February 16, 2007
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4 comments:
YAY! good job! it confuses me...but good job! <3
Very cool manipulation of structure! You use the parentheses (particularly) effectively.
I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Please consider pursuing it in your independent writing.
EMMY I LOVE IT
its really confusing..but it is SOOOOOO good =]
your poem is very different. Never really seen anything like it. It is very cool and independant. Good work!
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