Friday, February 16, 2007

e.e. cummings- Assignment #4

because it's -- e.e. Cummings

Spring
thingS

dare to do people

(& notthe other way

round)because it

's A
pril

Lives lead their own

persons(in
stead

of everybodyelse's)but

what's wholly marvellous my

Darling

is that you &
i are more than you

& i(be

ca
us

e It's we)




In the winter

in the winter faceS

blu

r(eyes tear fromthecold)

January’S wind blows
And hits peoples

faces.
The (only sound)is the one
of the trees blowing in the wind.

Me (and

you) we

walk down the empty
streets

until the sun goes d

ow
n.

4 comments:

Sam C said...

YAY! good job! it confuses me...but good job! <3

Mr. Popken said...

Very cool manipulation of structure! You use the parentheses (particularly) effectively.

I look forward to reading more of your poetry. Please consider pursuing it in your independent writing.

kelly said...

EMMY I LOVE IT
its really confusing..but it is SOOOOOO good =]

natalie said...

your poem is very different. Never really seen anything like it. It is very cool and independant. Good work!